I feel confident about my topic in this draft. I feel like I truly have a topic that is not only a part of history but is a part of our local history. What I love about my topic is that nobody knows about. I love it when people say, "That really happened," or "I have never heard of that." It makes me feel like I taught somebody that day. I am concerned about my works cited part of my essay because I am confused about what goes on it.
I felt like the detailed outline helped me a lot because it showed me what to write about in each paragraph. The hard part was the works cited because I am confused about what it is supposed to be. When you read my paper I want you to focus on me repeating myself because I seem to do this a lot and to help me fix my works cited.
Well, I can relate to your description of someone because during the peer drafts of the detailed outline I said the exact same thing. But all in all I really do enjoy your topic and I feel like you know a lot of information on it. Great job Squid!
ReplyDeleteI wish I could say that about my topic. But your paper sounds like it will be good.
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